Ideas: * Redflags: * Suggestions: * Page 9- "A basket of relevant indicators" sounds too informal. Simply say "and relavant indicators?" Recommendations: * Page 2, Paragraph 1 of the Overview repeats on Page 9, Paragraph 1 of the Introduction. Condense and reorder. Changes: * Pg 4, Point 1 of Overview-- Enabling Policies * change develop to developed * Table of Contents * Work Group 1-- Title inconsistent. Use "&" or "And." * Pg 9 Thematic Work Groups * Work Group 1-- Title inconsistent. Use "&" or "And." * Pg 15, last paragraph, second line--Change 'form' to 'from' * pg 15, last paragraph, third line- 'exclusion' or 'inclusion?' Issues: * Pg 7 Will the page read "Deliberately Left Blank" or describe the following section in some manner? * Comments: