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Saved Dec 18, 2013
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Suggestions:
  • Page 9- "A basket of relevant indicators" sounds too informal.  Simply say "and relavant indicators?"
Recommendations:
  • Page 2, Paragraph 1 of the Overview repeats on Page 9, Paragraph 1 of the Introduction.  Condense and reorder.
Changes:
  • Pg 4, Point 1 of Overview-- Enabling Policies
  • change develop to developed
  • Table of Contents
  • Work Group 1-- Title inconsistent.  Use "&" or "And." 
  • Pg 9 Thematic Work Groups
  • Work Group 1-- Title inconsistent.  Use "&" or "And."
  • Pg 15, last paragraph, second line--Change 'form' to 'from'
  • pg 15, last paragraph, third line- 'exclusion' or 'inclusion?'
Issues:
  • Pg 7 Will the page read "Deliberately Left Blank" or describe the following section in some manner?
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